牛津大学语言学硕士延安中学教师 陆佳伟

　　笔者在长期修改各类学生作文中，发现了很多真实的错误，它们中有些具备很大的普遍性，，故在此列举53例易犯错和需润色的词句，供同学们参考。括号内为纠错说明。

　　一、易犯错的词汇

　　49.He reached out of his handsand got the woman’s purse out ofher bag.(去掉第一个of，将got改成took)

　　50.I have invited several friendstomy house.(house→ home)

　　51.Knockoffs can’t instead ofreal products. (instead of→ re-place; take the place of; sup-plant; substitute for)

　　52.catch my eyeballs (eyeballs→ eye)

　　53.Shanghai’s school buses arefamiliar to those in America.(familiar→ similar)

　　54.XX is so charming that Ican’t stand up to it. (stand up to→ resist)

　　55.I can’t agree on thewriter’schoice.(on→ with)

　　56.disagree it(disagree with it)

　　57.The high price todaymakesme afraid.(The high price todayputsme off.)

　　58.XX hasmade a bad influ-ence on Hainan (XX has harmedthe reputation ofHainan)

　　59.The film is so inspired.(inspired→ inspiring)

　　60.In the last(At last)

　　61.We can’t do this kind ofterrible affair.(affair→ thing)

　　62.Tourism won’t grow veryfar.(grow→ go)

　　63.We can become morehealthy. (More healthy →healthier)

　　64.resource ofmoney (sourceofmoney)

　　65.splendid scenery like picture(picturesque scenery)

　　66.make the balance between(create/find/strike the balancebetween)

　　67.I can hardly bare this(bare→ bear; tolerate, put up with)

　　68.is similarwith sth.(with→to)

　　69.XX went pass us (pass→past)

　　70.the discovery of new prod-ucts (the invention of new prod-ucts)

　　71.Since people are always notsatisfied with their present situation,theywant further development.

　　(Since people are never satisfiedwith their present situation, theywant further development.)

　　72.I’ve got known that myunclewas sick.(I’ve learnt thatmyuncle was sick.)

　　73.life conditions (living con-ditions)

　　74.living level (living stan-dards)

　　75.It’s a cure to heart diseases.(to→ for )

　　76.do the best to our earth(to→ for to加坏事，for加好事) )

　　77.Steve Jobs is a wonderfulpresenter.(presenter→ speaker )

　　78.Iphone (iPhone )

　　79.do so crazy things (so→such)

　　80.theYouth ofChina (Youthsin China)

　　81.destroy the balance (destroy→ upset/disturb)

　　82.a lot skills (a lot of skills)

　　83.skills about presentation(skills of presentation)

　　84.in these aspects (in theserespects有 this, these, that,those用respect)

　　85.learn knowledge (learn→acquire/gain)

　　86.Presentation is very impor-tant in everybody’s life. (Presenta-tion → The presentation或 者Presentations)

　　87.contribute to the society (去掉the)

　　二、需润色的词句

　　88.Christmas is coming (Christ-mas is around the corner.)

　　89.I’ve got a nuclear familywith only 3 family members.(with→ consisting of)

　　90.I am happy to be amemberofmy family.(Family is to mewhat a harbor is to a ship.)

　　91.I feel love aroundme.(I amwrapped up in love.)

　　92.We should show the friendlywelcome. (We should welcomethem in a friendlymanner/way.)

　　93.It gave the pressure on…(Itexerted/place/put pressure on…)

　　94.more and more people (Anincreasing number of people、A growing number of people)

　　95.play amore and more im-portant role (Play an increasinglyimportant role)

　　96.I don’t agree. (I am op-posed to this view. I heartilydisagree with this view.)

　　97.a lot of (可数：a large number of, amultitude of 不可数：hugeamounts of, a large quantity of)

　　98.different kinds of (A widevariety of 、A huge selection of 、An array of)

　　99.take part in (Participate in、Partake in)

　　100.get something (obtain/earnsomething: obtain/earn a degree、gain something: gain knowledge、Earn something: earn a goodreputation、glean something: gleaninformation)

　　101.Having friendswho are dif-ferent from us have these advantages.

　　(There are advantages tohaving friends who are differentfrom us.)